10 wc week 6
me and my parents went for a walk to the park my brother wasn't home so we locked the door. There is a pond there so we walk there we walk past and saw legs stick out of the water. My mom called the cops. The cops came they pulled the legs out and it was a prank. We walked home and the door was open with my older brother in side wet you know who did the prank he was in big trouble.
A great idea for a story. I sure he was in big trouble. Missing your first capital to begin your story. Oops. Read over your writing out loud and to a peer to help revise and edit.
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