100 wc
One day on a class field trip the class went to a lab.Patrick and josh went into a unlock room in the lab. They looked around a saw a purple crocodile in a cage. Patrick said this look weird josh said no it look cool Patrick said we should get out. But then the door opened the professor walked in he was mad. Patrick said what twisted professor are you. All the kids looked in the room he said did you mess with my difficult work we said no. he kicked us out of the lab. Josh said what do we do now.
A great start to your story. Be sure to read it out loud to your self or a friend as you will pick up on sentences that need some editing. Remember names should be capitalized and when someone is speaking use quotation marks.
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